tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448461834872168955.post4172037371957761662..comments2023-07-06T08:11:20.269-07:00Comments on Stories from the Voices in my Head: SFFSAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10272753513430703322noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448461834872168955.post-56846417879651465312013-03-26T06:15:12.359-07:002013-03-26T06:15:12.359-07:00Excellent snippet! And his reaction is great!!!Excellent snippet! And his reaction is great!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448461834872168955.post-1213719788710827042013-03-24T12:32:21.572-07:002013-03-24T12:32:21.572-07:00Thank you :)Thank you :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10272753513430703322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448461834872168955.post-20649530499174383902013-03-24T10:26:29.671-07:002013-03-24T10:26:29.671-07:00Yay. Thank you. Creepy people are so much fun to p...Yay. Thank you. Creepy people are so much fun to play around withAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10272753513430703322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448461834872168955.post-41197558924348241812013-03-24T10:21:58.878-07:002013-03-24T10:21:58.878-07:00Since I read it already, I'll just keep my mou...Since I read it already, I'll just keep my mouth shut. But, as I thought the first time, great description on the sister! :DTK Toppinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00192845664117376346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448461834872168955.post-46164077738278158362013-03-24T09:57:11.718-07:002013-03-24T09:57:11.718-07:00Evil twin sister. No one is happy to see thatEvil twin sister. No one is happy to see thatAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10272753513430703322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448461834872168955.post-69852276875770099352013-03-23T20:48:20.066-07:002013-03-23T20:48:20.066-07:00Very nice. I sense she's not exactly happy to ...Very nice. I sense she's not exactly happy to see him...and vice versa.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448461834872168955.post-35771579810749731592013-03-23T12:44:32.776-07:002013-03-23T12:44:32.776-07:00Maayyybbbeeeeee?Maayyybbbeeeeee?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10272753513430703322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448461834872168955.post-78386320087116575872013-03-23T12:31:53.562-07:002013-03-23T12:31:53.562-07:00Ahh... enter the antagonist?Ahh... enter the antagonist?Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448461834872168955.post-30592128724967020072013-03-23T12:23:20.810-07:002013-03-23T12:23:20.810-07:00Thank you :) I try my best to give Erik a painful ...Thank you :) I try my best to give Erik a painful life Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10272753513430703322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448461834872168955.post-68667016775038611722013-03-23T12:22:23.897-07:002013-03-23T12:22:23.897-07:00Well I can't really tell but it's not good...Well I can't really tell but it's not good news for Erik lemme tell you thatAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10272753513430703322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448461834872168955.post-34294324939801017852013-03-23T12:20:59.805-07:002013-03-23T12:20:59.805-07:00I love the elements of this: the details, high emo...I love the elements of this: the details, high emotion and look into his relationship with his sister. There's a great amount of tension in this. Great snippet. J.M. Blackmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12452636020480500983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448461834872168955.post-18065443600061004672013-03-23T10:58:04.129-07:002013-03-23T10:58:04.129-07:00Lots of nice phrases in that excerpt! Curious abou...Lots of nice phrases in that excerpt! Curious about this sister. Why did she come now?Patrick Stutzmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06701695102224164322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448461834872168955.post-28481765317661629042013-03-23T09:21:43.295-07:002013-03-23T09:21:43.295-07:00Nice set up for the "sister" surprise an...Nice set up for the "sister" surprise and some great details and tension. I liked the last line, really defines the character through dialogue. S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448461834872168955.post-58405728784636001342013-03-23T06:03:44.205-07:002013-03-23T06:03:44.205-07:00Yeah. His sister cock blocks him even on the fourt...Yeah. His sister cock blocks him even on the fourth wallAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10272753513430703322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448461834872168955.post-32000164464161513392013-03-23T06:01:44.354-07:002013-03-23T06:01:44.354-07:00I guess only Sam Spade gets the beautiful dames......I guess only Sam Spade gets the beautiful dames....I'm sure the last person he wanted was his sister! nice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448461834872168955.post-54370401098995712822013-03-23T04:31:05.656-07:002013-03-23T04:31:05.656-07:00Thank you. :DThank you. :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10272753513430703322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448461834872168955.post-14375021096272448072013-03-23T04:30:39.386-07:002013-03-23T04:30:39.386-07:00Oh you have no idea. HeheOh you have no idea. HeheAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10272753513430703322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448461834872168955.post-58587944611390214352013-03-23T03:13:33.852-07:002013-03-23T03:13:33.852-07:00You did a wonderful job with the description. I ca...You did a wonderful job with the description. I can really picture her in my head. <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1448461834872168955.post-26625784540298533152013-03-22T21:12:57.680-07:002013-03-22T21:12:57.680-07:00Love this phrase: "...burned with an intensit...Love this phrase: "...burned with an intensity that seemed to weigh your soul and then judge accordingly." <br /><br />Sounds like one of those less than pleasant family reunions!Starr O'Harahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02509686040802509537noreply@blogger.com