Feeling danger
approaching from behind, I dropped and rolled to my left just in time to avoid
the clawed swipe of a third monster. My momentum carried me to the other side
of the room and, even at that distance, I stabbed in my assailant’s direction.
The short sword’s blade elongated disproportionately, skewering the giant lizard
and embedding its tip in the wall behind it. I cancelled the spell, reverting
the blade back to its original form, and spun and scanned the room for the two
remaining monsters. I spotted one at the far end of the corridor, scurrying in
retreat. I reversed the grip on Djinn, holding it point downward, and swiped
with all my might, slashing the distance between me and my quarry. A
crescent-shaped wave of blue energy erupted from my blade and streaked toward
the lizard, bifurcating it. I smiled at my second victory.
Momentarily letting
my guard down.
Too late, my senses
warned me of danger as I felt a mighty blow on my right side, which knocked me
into a door, crashing me inside a dimly-illuminated classroom.
Always have to keep track of the number of assailants you're still facing...sort of like the number of bullets you have left, when you're not able to use a blue energy-erupting blade and all. Good snippet!
ReplyDeleteWow! This is a really good combat sequence, using both weapons and magic. I'm envious! And I like how Erik can make mistakes - fallible heroes are far more interesting than supermen.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot man. I really appreciate it
Delete"Great shot, kid! Don't get cocky!" -- Han Solo
ReplyDeleteAnd now we know my influences
DeleteMan, you write some kick ass SF action. You've managed to combine so many elements so well. Tightly written, very exciting. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteOk this comment just made my day. Thanks a lot man, really appreciate it
DeleteClassroom? Oh, yes, this is in a school, isn't it.
ReplyDeleteYep. A school invaded by lizardmen. In my world the bad people are conveniently reptilian. For now
DeleteYikes. I hope he kept a grip on his cool sword.
ReplyDeleteLate to the party, but I do have to repeat that this is a great action scene. Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteAnd it only takes one lapse to wind up in a world of hurt! Hope he's okay.