The monster, erect on
two legs, hissed furiously and stormed into the classroom after me.
I groped for Djinn
and found nothing. “Crap, crap, crap, crap,” I cursed, each word louder than
the one before it. I pulled out my pistols and started squeezing their triggers
at the Lizardman—which was nearly on top of me—pouring every ounce of magical
aura into the guns and the bullets it was firing. After what seemed like a
year, I opened my eyes and saw a dead Lizardman splayed on the ground, its head
resting comfortably between my legs.
“That went well,” I muttered
in relief as I retrieved Djinn. A series of deep breaths helped my racing
heartbeat to regain its normal tempo. I made it back to the pitch-black
corridor and prayed that that was the last of the Lizardmen.
I noticed the telltale signs of a spell cast
only in the corridor; a dampener, reducing one’s sense of smell, sight, and sound. Lizardmen, which used
their heat-seeking abilities, just like a snake, would not be hindered by the enchantment: this magic was clearly meant for any unfortunate idiot who happened to stumble
in.
Clever introducing the new threat through the recently cast spell! Good hook.
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What a place for the Lizardman to end up! Lol - great snippet :)
ReplyDeleteNice sequence - the growing fear manifesting in shutting his eyes at the end. And the new threat comes in very effectively. Good snippet.
ReplyDeleteAnd not just ANY unfortunate idiot!
ReplyDeleteVery deftly done.
Oh wow, I love this snippet!
ReplyDeleteOh, my. Are there more?
ReplyDeleteLove the action in this snippet! Nice!
ReplyDeleteNo snippet from me this week! Next time. :)
A well written, action packed snippet. I love the introduction of the new threat--fantastic details.
ReplyDeleteI love a good lizard battle. BTW: My snippet is on my blog but alas I have forgotten to submit it this week.
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