Friday, 14 June 2013

SFFS

So, let me try and explain this scene. Giant underground bunker. Young succubus has to tame a monster. a very famous Chinese monster. Who has way too much energy.
Enjoy.

(BDW we're still on unedited Legacy book 2)


“Someone needs to chill off the Ritalin,” I said. Sun Wo Kung looked at me sharply and blew a wet raspberry, covering me in phlegm. 
He pointed a finger at me and screeched “Ugly!” and returned to huffing in Abi’s face.

“Son of a bitch,” said Amaymon as the cat burst out laughing. “I like this guy already.”

The Monkey King jumped off of Abi, doing a wide backflip. He pointed at the cat.
“Kitty. Kittymakesgooddinner. Wanttoeatkitty, wanttoeatkitty.” 

10 comments:

  1. Hmm...I wonder if Amaymon still likes the famous Chinese monster after that last comment. Great snippet!

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  2. Eww, monkey phlegm. Even if it's holy monkey phlegm. >.<

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  3. Can you rent out the Monkey King? I have a pair of cats around here who could use a little more fear in their lives... :-)

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  4. Haha! Funny scene... Monkey's, never liked them. :D

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  5. Ew. Gross phlegm. I'm towelling off now.

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  6. Sung Wo Kung is a little short on manners. He can't eat the cat, it has some of the best lines.

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  7. I laughed as much as I cringed. Ick! Great humor and detail.

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  8. LOL!! Ritalin and kitty cat... I wonder what kind of weight loss plan THAT diet falls under.

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