Another part of chapter 2 from my novel Firstborn. And before you ask; yes I did just kill my main character in the second chapter of the first book of a 13 book series. Just sayin'.
Enjoy
The air in front of
me popped and a Lizardman materialized out of thin air: this one was clearly different from the others. Its hide
was a different shade of gray, lighter and milkier and its eyes shone yellow and
were shaped like a cat’s, rather than a reptile’s. Its joints were more slender
and its muscles more wiry, perfect for speed attacks. Its tail, which,
according to the few depictions I’ve read, Lizardmen used as a sort of
counter-balance to aid them walk on their hind legs, was shorter and stouter,
as if its owner had evolved beyond the purpose of needing a tail. Its long
snout was considerably shorter, as was its neck. But the real danger was the
claws; the unusually straight, sharp claws it bore on each hand were serrated
on one side.
To my knowledge, none ever
had serrated claws, or indeed any of the features that this particular specimen
bore which, I realized with morbid horror, were self-inflicted.
The monster’s crocodile smile widened and it dawned on me that this monster,
unlike its primal brethren, was intelligent.
Then with a blur it
plunged one clawed hand into my chest.
As I fell onto my
knees and onto the ground, I thought, Did
that giant gecko just chuckle at me?
Eeek! That cannot be good.
ReplyDeleteGreat descriptions. Don't worry about killing off characters, especially in a sci-fi or fantasy story where one can find ways to bring them back. ;-)
ReplyDeleteOh, sh!t, that's creepy. And awesome. I love, love, love the details and I was totally sucked into this snippet. I loved these lizardmen from the start, but an intelligent one? You've got me hanging on.
ReplyDeleteThanks. Much appreciated. Nothing like a smart lizard to make you shake in your boots
DeleteI'm at Chapter 14...I won't say any more. :D
ReplyDeleteNo spoilers!! You should be getting to the juicy parts soon
DeleteDeath never kept a good character down.
ReplyDeleteOoops. Lost your main character at this stage? Carelessness, I call it. I like the description of the lizardman - this is evolution at work. Great sequence.
ReplyDeleteI prefer to call it 'make Erik suffer for Ryan's amesement'
DeleteI love the last line - Giant Gecko indeed.
ReplyDeleteWell, that was unexpected! What a great build-up. I was NOT expecting that intelligence. GREAT!
ReplyDeleteYeah. Smart lizard = fun times. Amusement for Ryan
DeleteThat's gonna take more than a band-aid to fix... :(
ReplyDeleteGreat description of the giant gecko. And you have me hooked to find out what happens next!
Thank you. Much appreciated =)
DeleteUh-oh!
ReplyDeleteGreat piece!
Nasty!
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